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Uneduated Zombie
During a test a zombie just cant get it right.
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Jimmy Horner
He starts the exclamation before the zombie character starts eating the car. Take you out of the scene as a viewer when that logic is overlooked. The movement feels unnatural for the character. His neck is especially strange.
Simon HENRY
Poses are correct, especially the hands of the zombie, but the animation could be more fluid. And when the zombie turns to look at the car, he turns back too soon for me.
Dan Paris
Timing was off a little from the beginning when eating the car. Start the reaction about 20 frames later.
Danny Kneip
Zombie should eat car before being told not to? Looks like a fun rig to play around with. His left hand noticeable (to me, at least) comes through the table at F169, no matter how hard you tried to avoid it. The other character also goes through the table on occasion. Good use of the sound effects and an okay lip sync. I like the sulking pose at the end. And I wish the zombie stayed turned around looking for that car after it was thrown.. would have been a really effective gag! Good job overall.