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Hospice

by Sarah Gilbert

Final Rating: 5.10. Finished #39 out of 144 entries.

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Animator

Sarah Gilbert

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

30 days

Description

An old man eating a toy car.

Comments

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Jimmy Horner

Cute idea, but the loud bump doesn't really fit the action of putting a toy car on the tray. Maybe the character could slam down the tray and to keep the audio and visuals more in sync.

Dieguito Pritchett

haha, love it

Patrick Verlangieri

Good idea

I would just exaggerate some poses more

Michael Minasyan

good idea

Aldo Joseph Kcomt

haha pretty funny take on it

Danny Kneip

I personally don't feel the performance of the speaker is believable. It's a great bit of character animation, in areas, but the expressions are not a great match with the audio. The cut from F162 of him standing tall to F163-F164 where he comes in head down is super strange. The old man is well done, overall.

Travis

Beginning facial expression doesn't seem to match passion or frustration heard in audio.