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RC Car
by Matt Peponis
A young boy plays with his RC car, only to have his dog ruin the fun.
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Dieguito Pritchett
nice idea for the story, but don't be afraid to push the performance where necessary
Danny Kneip
A good, solid foundation which needs much more attention, obviously. The boy is pretty subdued, and not the perfect companion to the audio of a screaming person.
Robert Firestone
The actions don't match the intensity of the dialogue.
Owen
expression! needed...arms!
Damián Navarro Méndez
his mouth doesn't move at all, there are lots of parts where the action is freezed. And check that from frame 140 to 160 he has only his right arm
Corentin
Could be cute, but the little boy need to be more expressive ^^