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Final Rating: 5.31. Finished #31 out of 144 entries.

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Experience

8 years

Time Taken

2 days

Description

This is my tutorial movie .
Thanx for beetel studio & best frend hoseyn ebrahimzad.

Comments

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zeinab

very very nise

sh3d

very very goooood animate

Tianyu Chen

Like the animation, very professional. However, the windows are wired. They are myopia glasses! Anyway great work.

Masi

very gooooood

Mohammadreza hashemi

THE GOOD JOB

K Thomas Fosse

I like it but it's too much "rubber-arms" I think (I don't know what else to call it..). I like the car..

Eva Elmo Leung

Glass is a bit warped looking.

Owen

It would be more satisfying to see closer 'how' doggy is eating the car, hard to see at the start. Man's movement into the car is like he is being sucked instead of 'moving into' the car out of exasperation. Eye rolls nice.

srinivas

animation is fine but lip sinc off

Valecia Briars

I think there should have been a closer shot of the dog eating the car. Perhaps it should have been done early on. He looks like he is just playing with the rear view mirror. I struggled to see what he was doing or what he was; I didn't know if he was a dog until the end.

Danny Kneip

Good overall movement of the character - very fluid. The lip sync needs additional polishing. Watching this with the volume down, the character isn't yelling after the foot stomp (but we know the character in the audio is!). I think you could have really pushed the character even further to sell "anger" or "frustration". The car rocks really well when he slams the door.