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PawnShop Outrage
by Cesar
Character is upset about seeing a car being eaten on tv inside a PawnShop
Comments
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Warren Seeley
Dude I'm so glad you were able to get it done. You've some nice acting bits in there. When he says "Don't eat the car" there this awesome pose in there that reads well and the little movements you added in there are a nice touch. Another great moment is when he says "Not the car! and he's at the window with his head looking up screaming. I like that acting bit. Really sells the emotion. And the sliding of the hands down the window is great too. Nice scene layout. It reads well. Nice job man! See ya at work.
Tobias Egeli
Acting wise i find it a bit strange that he walks by, watch the tv looks away and then start to "complain". But the animation is ok.
srinivas
good....
Danny Kneip
Fresh concept! The first camera shot is really nice, but the camera cut / swipe at F297 left me puzzled. Good movement and gestures.. the character really comes to life.