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Not the Car !!
Excuse me for the rendering, a little basic. I haven't the time to do the lighting...
Don't punished me for that ! lol
Comments
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Bethany Levy
Some nice movement in there, but I think some of the key poses are sitting on the wrong inflections in his voice.
Eva Elmo Leung
Ending lip syncing is not present, context needs more definition; maybe a background would've been more helpful.
Owen
I get that he's thinking the last line, but would be nice to have facial indicators like pursing lips and rolling his eyes up.
Jon Sheldon
The first half is really interesting. I like the little head nod towards the end. The poses throughout could have had better line of action to create really nice silhouettes.
Blake Bender
still needs lip sync
Jez
not enough time to finish ...hmm