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Manny discovers his pet is eating the interior of his car and this is what happens
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Dieguito Pritchett
aww... haha, try to work some eyebrow expressions in there
Danny Kneip
Strange that you would bisect his head with that window. I like the effect, but it's quite distracting, as is the camera move from inside the car, through the windshield to outside the car (which then lurches forward before falling back again). The lip sync needs some polishing - missing quite a few "OH" shapes. The concept, of course, is adorable, and will only benefit from greater attention. The little monster's tongue, for example, has very limited movement and he never blinks! Overall, it's a nice render.
Dan Paris
Great animation. The only thing i can see is the creature is missing some follow through.
Owen
Great. Though technically not the 'high end' yours was the first to acknowledge the sound of the keys which escaped me earlier. Just a subtle look down outside the car was a great cue. Secondly, I felt real love bond between the two characters in the end. Nice.
Travis
Love the camera.
Yuki Radcliffe
It looks like you put a lot of work into the lighting and material, which is nice. But I think that extra few hours would have been put to better use on the character animation. It falls just slightly flat. Good job overall, though!
Jez
I'd bet you want us to admire that glass effect (wink)