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Don't eat my GTO !
by Leeroy
Bigfatstrong eats my gto...
Comments
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Dieguito Pritchett
camera shake WAY too distracting
Puja kundu
Couldn't comprehend the camera shake.
Jimmy Horner
The camera is shaking a lot, the speaker doesn't act very well in this scene you may need a different character show the emphasis of emotion.
Christian Greyeyes
- Camera shaking which will risk distracting viewers
- Can't easily tell what's going on
- foreground character is dimly lit
Dan Paris
tough to see the lips. Timing or the lips were off from the clip. Lacked action when little guy was getting angry.
Eva Elmo Leung
Camera shaking! Why is the camera shaking?! GAH!
Tobias Egeli
i really wonder what went through your mind? What is that chest, why is there an earthquake and so on.
Amartya Mukherji
why is your camera shaking?
Owen
Took me a while to figure out it was a bedroom. Needs nursery wallpaper or something. Main character is walking mostly, not hopping or gesticulating the emotion. Camera shake is distracting (if that was on purpose). _Love_ the giant baby - I think I could watch that bearded baby antics much longer. This could be really fun with more work.