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Toy maker's problem
It is a scene at a toy shop
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Robert
It starts too late. It's about 11 sec.
Sajjad Afzal
Stay there and you will get it one day... Keep on trying.
Michael Minasyan
study disney 12 principles of animation
Dan Paris
timing is off. Running seemed as though he was moving in slow-mo. Lacking in action from the reaction. Make sure your solids don't go through solids (hand goes through the car).
Eva Elmo Leung
Lip sync is off, clipping errors are highly visible when the monkey eats the car, falling animation for the monkey is off from the sound.
Alisha-Kay
could see at time that a few things went through each other. great idea though
Damián Navarro Méndez
you tried to do too many things when you need to practice every aspect fo animation, beginning with the run cycle. The character has no expression at all, bad lip sync.
I'm still trying to understand the mokeys slow motion fall, and the car going through the cahracters fingers.
Keep practicing fundamentals