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His car

by Jordan Chedalavada

Final Rating: 4.10. Finished #75 out of 144 entries.

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Experience

few years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Batman really cares about his car.

Comments

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Danny Kneip

Lip sync needs quite a bit of attention and the cut away to the kid lasts for too long during the monologue, in my opinion. Batman's arm swings (F41 - F49) are really strange, as it looks like their coming from the sides and not straight forward, which is the angle they end up at. Also, keeping him stationary distracts from the performance. The concept is amusing but needs much more polishing.

[user]

very floaty and too fast

Owen

A bit confused as to the situation. Is he crazy? What's the car chewer's motives? Nice environment.

Wiwek Poudyal

you should have given much more time on animation