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OMG the car
by laura
Alex tries to tell to a monter not to eat his car
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animation not too good need to add more weight
Jimmy Horner
work on the weight of the character. His legs and arms pop some of the time.
Danny Kneip
Nice combo of 3D animation with a 2d bg. The color scheme is pleasing and it's really believable, overall. The lip sync needs quite a bit of smoothing out, as does the walk cycle. His reaction at the "THUNK" audio cue (around F187) is really nice. The "turn-around" is awkward at F206 - assuming his weight is centered, he moves his right leg but the weight of his body never adjusts appropriately. Additionally, you might add some blinking to create more believability.
Eva Elmo Leung
Lip syncing could be a bit more defined. Background is a bit too cartoon-y in retrospect to the character
Dan Paris
Good animation, but in my opinion only...the eyes in the beginning were held shut a little too long. The idea was already posed at the start, so to continue to have the eyes remain closed threw it off for me.
Jon Sheldon
The upper body is really interesting. The quick movements of the upper body is interesting. The legs pop a little bit towards the end. Also, try changing up the silhouette with the key poses.