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Monster Park
by Hanung Lee
Monster eating the Monster Park's custodian's car.
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eunhyecho
wow
Dieguito Pritchett
love the drawings... work a bit more on staging your characters in the scene though, 157-215 he's performing dead center of the screen, try to avoid that if you can
Henry Alfonso
Really like how you combined the 2-d . 3-d aspect
Simon HENRY
Nice synchronisation with the step sounds, but it doesn't really suit with the speech at the beginning. It's like "you're eating the car !" *jumps* and *stops*.
I would have seen it more like *jumps* "you're eating" *stop* "the caaaaar!" *theatral-pose*
But the animation is really fluid, and the cartoon style works fine. Good job !
Ori Gellman
Some crazy stuff you're doing there.. Great work!
Christian Greyeyes
Notes: in my opinion, your character is pretty close to conveying the feeling of the dialogue.
190-220: while it's still conveying the urgency and anger of the voice, I don't know what your character is doing.
Danny Kneip
Great work! Really nice visuals, poses, motion and lip sync. You clearly have a talent.
Mohammadreza hashemi
GOOD JOB
Tobias Egeli
relly good animation overall. And the style is super orignal i must say. The only downer is the idee, its identical to previous entys i have voted on. And I will predict more where a monster/baby are eating a car and a guy is fraking out.
Robert Firestone
Very cool! Love the mix of 2D and 3D.
Sajjad Afzal
This piece could be the winner.
Davit Martirosyan
Awesome! Top 3
Eshan
Beautiful animation! My second ' i'ill never wash my eyes again!!!" this voting!
Wow! So amazing. The actions are so perfectly synced with the sound... just perfect!
Sergio Candela Ramirez
I liked this one very much, love how you mixed 3D and 2D, congrats for that
Although, I find the jump a little weird..
PRIYA RANJAN DEB
1st few frms mlcm s freez n ded. should hv some movmnt. animation s crazy. composition can be far more better. last part the foreground should visible.
Alexandre Spontak
Good idea to mix 2d and 3d





