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Yoritine (the car)
by Toine Bean
Description
A man finds his friend eating his car...
Comments
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Jimmy Horner
The poses in the beginning feel stiff and the camera work could be stronger. The middle feels stronger with the interaction between the two characters. The eyes in the beginning and end shift around a lot, as a viewer it confuses me. Good stuff though keep it up.
Harry G
Funny concept. It does need some more fine tuning. The 1st shot where he's walking towards the car "No no no... " His eyes dont seem to be fixed and the acting/posing needs improvement.