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room mates dilemma

by pluto

Final Rating: 4.88. Finished #46 out of 144 entries.

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Animator

pluto

Experience

5

Time Taken

1 week

Description

based on true story

Comments

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Dieguito Pritchett

animators ALWAYS creeping out other people when all we want to do is learn... when will they understand!!! haha, he'll have a good reference video for sure

Jimmy Horner

This is an odd way to think about this shot but kinda funny. I take it this may be some life experience inspiring this idea.

Noyan Özkan

wtf is this?

Iván González

I like so much the idea

Eva Elmo Leung

Not sure what is happening.

Owen

I want to see his mouth hanging open a little after the first "..car!". Very nice.

Danny Kneip

The lip sync seems hurried, as do all the motions and gestures. I'm not particularly sure what the sleeping person is there for.

Elmira Solo

what is going on? I don't understand the story. The animation seems to be going in the right direction but I can't be sure without understanding what is going on.

Jon Sheldon

The moth sync at the beginning is a little off.

Mohamed Javith

so i guess he is acting out for the dialogue. it would be much clearer if you have added a camera in the scene so that it feels like he is recording his acting. nice idea though..