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Bad Influence

by Dieguito Pritchett

Final Rating: 3.14. Finished #114 out of 144 entries.

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Experience

3 years

Time Taken

10 days during free-time from work and school

Description

A day at the park, a mischievous child takes advantage of his naive buddy, causing his father great calamity.

Comments

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Robert

Balance!!!! There's is no balance!!!! Timing is little better. I see the potential.

Jimmy Horner

There is not attention to gravity and physics in this animation. Study how objects jump and fall and it will improve your animation skills as a whole.

Dan Paris

Some of the spots seemed to be slow when the action calls for fast. I understand your concept and it was good.

Eva Elmo Leung

Animation wise it's alright, but it lacks a certain bit of weight especially with the robot character and the main character.

Kayla

Nice idea I think the characters needed a little more polish eg. no sliding movements but otherwise a cool entry!

Owen

Lacking a sense of gravity and weight.

Damián Navarro Méndez

Is he flying?, or in a low gravity planet? try to work on the weight. Also the face is flat and no expressions at all can be found bjut in the very beginning.

PRIYA RANJAN DEB

superman.