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Little Monster
by Gero M
A man with a little monster...
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Robert
I don't like this lateral movement in face.
Jimmy Horner
Very nice animation for the speaking character. The audio for him taking the car away from the baby doesn't fit very well. It creates a bit of disbelief in the shot. Great movement though, a lot of fun to watch.
Dieguito Pritchett
nice posing and performance, but I don't know about that sound working too well with him snatching the car...
Leonardo Pereira
Nice Acting!!!
hamid
the lip sync is off but good animation
Ori Gellman
Great stuff but... the action you picked for the sound effect doesn't quite match...
Bobby Sassone
Really enjoyed the facial expressions on this one. Probably could have pushed the exaggeration a little bit further but it's still fun to watch.
Owen
Only nitpic is the thunk sound doesn't quite fit the hand swipe on the toy. Lovely timeline of expression details.
Danny Kneip
Beautiful render and some nice performances, but the lip sync doesn't seem to fit (the first line is good, but downhill after that). The camera choices are all really strong, as are the expressions. It's a really strong foundation.
Amartya Mukherji
loved the animation, and acting..
Probably a bit too much fluidity in the body and jaw, but that is the style i suppose.
The expression where he finally shouts "..CAR", is very odd. The right eye is totally white. So rectify that.
I loved the expression with which he entered the room, expecting the baby fast asleep.
But the best part is the screenplay, how you divided the scenes and constructed the story.. Top 5 stuff. :-)
Davit Martirosyan
to mach stretch and squash, overplayed, but animation is good)
Oliver Pedersen
His head movement around 165 is maybe a little too much
Jon Sheldon
The body movements are really nice, the phonemes and audio sync are a little off.
Damián Navarro Méndez
EXCELLENT facial expressions work. The problem is the lip sync, but the movements (specially when he is going to turn on the light) are great, try to work more on the hips and but movement in fram 180-195, he moves the chest but the bottom part is without movement.