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Eat the Car
by Brady
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One hungry baby, and one mad one
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Dieguito Pritchett
who's upset and who's eating the car??? feels like the same character does both
Danny Kneip
A confusing entry, in almost every way. But primarily, the man is yelling at the kid for eating the car, before the kid actually starts eating the car. And then F84 jumps the line of action further creating confusion. This simply lacks fundamentals and needs much greater attention, which I hope you can give.
Jez
these are first steps .............