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eat_car
by XuDong
The kid eating his car them he in a bad mood.
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Dieguito Pritchett
whoa... I wish I knew why that kid was trying to eat the car, hard to follow the story here
Jimmy Horner
The character is not looking at the person eating the car, focus on where the characters are looking and make sure they act on their positions.
Danny Kneip
A few issues with the lip sync - the screaming character in the audio isn't complemented by a screaming animated character. He also has some issues with the limited space of the open window - namely, body parts going through the metal (F114 and F182). The idea is interesting and you have a nice foundation here and with additional polishing and attention to detail, could be a strong piece.
Damián Navarro Méndez
it's like he is not annoyed at all.. Work on the face overall