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Scariest thing EVER
a man who about to clean the kitchen but he saw something very scary
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Ivan Mendoza
Great job! Maybe a little more strength in the key poses would improve the overall animation a lot. More exageration.
Kevin
His reaction is great! So funny
Lim Hoe Kit
Love it! Great timing and holds and the idea is sound! Perhaps drop his shoulders a bit at the end to show disbelief/fear more? Other than that, pretty solid!
Abhik Paul
Nice.....
Marcus
Exemplary. The noises in the middle don't exactly match the roach's moves.
Juthamas Thongtae
Great !!!
Raziel Gore
I like it but maybe the joke would come off a bit stronger if he had a bit more inquisitive body movement whenever he looks at the can of bug spray before slamming it down
Breen Dania Heath
Amazing and natural movement here! It was an amazing take on the sound file! It was quite unexpected. I would put more movement in the finger on the cap of the spray can just so you know he is spraying it.
Frankie Wright
Great storyline
Lea
Using the lightsaber sounds for body turns seems a little... farfetched. Especially considering your shot here lends itself nicely to the use of an electrical flyswatter. nonetheless, the animation is really smooth and nicely executed. My only gripe would be that he stays frozen in midair around frame 237 for a tiny bit too long, a very slight drift might've helped.