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John VS Bill

by Melissa

Final Rating: 4.59. Finished #61 out of 161 entries.

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Animator

Melissa

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

28 hours

Description

May the force be with you!

Comments

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Ivan Mendoza

The landing on 194 needs to be more abrupt. One frame fully stretched, the next squashed on the ground.

Lim Hoe Kit

More polish and you've got a great work on your hands...

Zeeshan Karimi

Haha!! Low battery... Nice!

Though I'd pull back cameras a little where screen left character jumps down and the sword fight shot to keep the action with in the frame.

Keep up the great work! ^_^

Dexter Saulisbury

fun acrobatics

Remi Thewissen

there is trouble with your sound... now if your animationwas out of sink with the sound, that's what you were supposed to fix, not ajust the sound to the animation

lilyle

excellent!

Philip Petersen

Frankie Wright

Some great timings there, like the overall composition