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Jedi In Training
Animator
Experience
No formal experience, two years self-taught
Time Taken
The entire month, taking a busy college life into account
Description
An unsure girl has to face a formidable foe.
Comments
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Carolyn Mennecke
This is okay, but the motion is a bit stiff. The bit at the end where she extends her hand is the best part. Pretty good for your first time! :)
Eleftherios Kokkinakis
Hands look like they need a more natural flow
Elitsa Nedyalkova
Some of the animation is really good, some needs improvement, but I have to say I really liked the expressions!!
[user]
if a few of these poses had some more work I think this could be a good piece