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Strong & Persuasive !
A Little funny guy try to convice his Strong Russian Chief !
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Keith Sizemore
The acting seems to be everywhere on this and doesn't really sell the intention of the dialogue. I would try to simplify the acting and lessen the amount of large poses you use throughout.
Dalton Krajewski
Very well done! The body movement was very smooth and the timing gave it a lot of character and appeal. My only issue is that the mouth movements didn't synchronize with the audio very well--especially during the "Wesley Snipes" bit. Other than that timing issue, this is a very strong entry!
Yuri Marcel Vieira
good in general, Malcolm's lip sync seems a little bit off
William Harrison
The characters actions don't really fit the sound of the audio.
Shawshaank
The animation looks decent but it is overacted. He does not need to do a gesture for every word. Act it out how you would normally talk to someone and find key words to accentuate.