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set up
by tukuda
Description
To set the hair
Comments
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Jean Lamy
As a friendly tip. Get rid of the first 260 frames. maybe even more than that. You don't have to show that much "back story". That's perhaps 1 or 2 days of work spent on the first 11 seconds when you could've used all of that time to solidify your actual dialogue.