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Inappropriate

by Alex Wenziker

Final Rating: 3.74. Finished #76 out of 134 entries.

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Animator

Alex Wenziker

Experience

Bachelor of Fine Arts in Media Arts & Animation

Time Taken

3-4 weeks

Description

Pop Quiz:
How do you end on a pun when the second to last says " No it's inappropriate."

Answer:
By making it even more inappropriate.

Porl & Ed rigged models made by DarkStar.

Comments

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John Doree

Very nice! Try to incorporate more mouth rounding for the round vowels to break up the lip synch into wide and round mouth shapes.

Eric Heaton

The Timing and Spacing is really even and Slow throughout the whole shot

Also the Screen Left Character does not really change his facial expression at all or emote. Try acting it out yourself and use the eyebrows, eyelids and some Contrapasto on the body to create more dynamic clear poses to sell the scene