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Slap(stick)ing sense into you

by Luke Coleman

Final Rating: 3.20. Finished #97 out of 134 entries.

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Animator

Luke Coleman

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

30 hours

Description

After my first submission last month, I took the feedback provided and worked a lot more on blocking and curves. I even tried to animate a small little quadruped that's reacting to the conversation, although it could still use a little work.

Comments

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Laurent Châtellier

Violence for free...

Jean Lamy

This is over animated. If there was less movement, it think this would've been a nice concept. Focus on the two human character's first before jumping in with another character, especially a quadruped. Take it step by step.