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I worked hard.
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John Doree
Good work. Try to break down your movements so that each body part overlaps so you aren't always moving from pose to pose.
Laurent Châtellier
Nice playing with the sword.
Michael Kristiansen
quite stiff in their poses I'd say.. But heading in a good direction.
Dalton Krajewski
Very funny
Jean Lamy
Watch for the poses, the timing and the jumpiness of the characters.
predrag lazic
Audio needs to sync a little better.
Arnaud Peybernes
Between us, people (event vampire) can't talk like this while moving ;)
Good continuation, thanks for your work!