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Your fashion sucks!
by John Doree
If you are a vampire, with no reflection, getting dressed up sucks! Not the best, but I'd love to get your feedback. Good luck to everyone this month!
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Pink
This is good! However I feel as if the vampire's body language doesn't fit his tone of voice, if that makes any sense? The character seems to act more angry than the voice sounds; when he gets up from the chair the character looks like he's about to start screaming. The expressions the Blade character has are really good, though! I love the ending, keep up the great work!!
Shawshaank
Use the wide angle lens carefully, in your third cut it makes the character look dwarf like.