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Vampiretiquette
by Daniel Garcia October Competition Winner
Vlad just wants to be Blade...
Comments
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Keith Sizemore
This is an awesome piece, but the lack of frames makes it feel unfinished and a cleaner un hatched line quality would be great.
Dalton Krajewski
Excellent character designs and background! The smear frames were a great touch.
Ziggy Deutz
Woowzers, great stuff!
Todd Christiansen
I'm in awe!
Yuri Marcel Vieira
veeery good
Michael Kristiansen
Love it!
J.K. Riki
Nice production values and artwork! Clearly you spend a considerable amount of time working on this, and it shows.
Victor Pierce
If the whole thing had the fluidity of the first 45 frames, I would say this is easily the strongest one I've seen so far. The first few times I watched it, I didn't notice his gesture with his hand covering his face. I would recommend adding at least 4 or 5 frames of him easing back into that pose before he starts the dialogue, that way it reads better! And when his mouth closes at frame 33, I feel that's a bit too soon. It should close around frame 40 to match the word "Blade".
The second character's gestures are also pretty good, just need a few more frames to give it the same level of fluidity. I think this one is definitely worth going back and polishing! Nice job overall!