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on earth
There are few people left on earth and she protects her child
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Keith Sizemore
The body contact on the fall all happened at once. Focus some on offsetting the body and loosening up the spine. For example the screen right leg could have hit 1-2 frames sooner than the hip and the hand 1-2 frame after the hip. During the crawl look at putting compression on the feet that are pushing off the ground and adding a little slippage to the shoves ads a sense of realism. Try some joints on the baby. After a while the stiffness of it distracts from the performance.
Chanel Maria Novela
I love how she kiss her baby. but the fall movement is sill quite odd I think
Dyachok Anna
beautiful work! Such a deep atmosphere!!
But for me the girl moves a bit too much between 160-185 frames))) anyway good job, keep it up!
Ben Hall
good job