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"Spooky shock"
Description
a girl is shocked by the sound of window
Comments
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Chanel Maria Novela
the fall is still quite floaty but overall it's quite nice
Ben Hall
Some of her movements work but her falling is floaty and there needs more motion to keep her alive
Trenton Goodwin
I can tell the forward bending is meant for anticipation,but it isn't so methodological as moving the opposite way and then doing the action. It's more like alerting the character that something is going to happen.
Saren Mohil
Andrew Bower
I like the pushing the hair out of her face. That was a nice touch.