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Bad day
she had a very tiring day so she is kind of sleepy and she fall asleep will driving and get into the trouble.
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Janna K
The sounds match really well, and nothing feels too rushed, so good job on that! The woman's movements are really natural and don't feel forced. All I can say is that I can't quite tell what the object is supposed to be in front of the car, and since it is important to the story, I would suggest for future animations making sure that objects of interest are presented in a more visible manner! Nice job again on how easily the story flows!
Clément Pierre
Cool animation !
I like the idea, but you could have improve your storyboard I guess.
Good Job !
Dyachok Anna
wow this is really nice!
Composition of the first shot is weird though, so I didn't expect such a nice work)
Ben Hall
The moving car seems to keep us from seeing more animation
AZure Ray
Poor dog...
Norma
not quite as fluid with the car as with the character. Great performance