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Hisstory
by Chyntia
Description
An explorer who tries to pull his friend's focus from his tablet.
Comments
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Fred
I like it. Just need to see more body motion, particularly in the secondary character.
Owen Doud
Not enough acting, the fact that there are less in betweens is okay, however that means the keys have to be much stronger. Color could help.