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The Skeleton Tomb
by Daniel
A glimpse of Malcolms exploration into the skeleton tomb. Upon his journey he is teased and threatened by the skeletons in the tomb.
Is Malcolm hearing things or are the skeletons actually coming to life?
Comments
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Rachel Stuart
Nice use of body language here. Loving the little skeleton in the background. Perhaps you could move the torch to his other hand however, as parts of the dialogue were covered by it.
Mackenzie
Lip sync could use some larger mouth movements. The main character also seems to have too many poses to move between near the end, he has to move very fast and comes off almost rigid. I'd recommend removing a pose or two so he can still move quick, but not too fast
Conway Dobbs
the walk is very fast. Stands up fast. but the story is clear the the rest of the movement is smooth and good and overall a very nice animation that at this point I am nit picking XD good job.
William Moroso
rendering looks nice