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Caught on Cam!
Animator
Experience
less than 2 years
Time Taken
almost 1 month but not everyday i made it lol
Description
Doing for assessment~
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Mackenzie
The shots are a little confusing, not completely sure what all is going on in the scene. I would change the angle on the second character and not zoom in on his elbows. The flashing lights are an interesting idea, but should be toned down and limited, they are distracting from your character's motion and expressions.
Conway Dobbs
hand all over the place and the lights are distorting
Wes
Movements need more work , could be more fluid and I am not entirely sure what the story is here?