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2 Guys in the dark
by Darmayustha
Description
two guys who were in old graves in the middle of the forest
Comments
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Conway Dobbs
neeeeds work
John Vargas
hello! just a small suggestion, the transition that starts at 136 feels abrupt, what if a different camera angle was used? Hope this helps, interesting choice of story.