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THE WALL
by Bill L S
Description
Umm... there's a tour guide and a old man go to a cave and find a wall with a interesting pattern
Comments
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Conway Dobbs
what is fighting back?
Mackenzie
The animation is really nice, especially on the facial expressions. It looks like it still needs to be finished (the main character needs hair or a finished head). Adding a few more details in the first shot would be a good idea, it's the first thing the viewer sees and then it wouldn't stand out from the rest of the animation. Overall the animation is looking nice,
Reinnard Bartholius Dinata
Much WOW





