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Egypt Curse
Doing it for assessment haha :)
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Rachel Stuart
I love the way you've added in a prop to aid with the dialogue. The second voice however isn't shown on screen - perhaps by adding a different angle you could have achieved this.
Mackenzie
A closer shot to the character would be a good idea, or switching to a close up for his last line. He is too stiff in the beginning and when the second character speaks. Even when he isn't moving, there should be some slight form of animation at all times so that he doesn't look suddenly frozen and stiff. Overall the animation on his body and face when he is moving is done decently well.
Jason Wilbert
hai andre kapan kamu mau main ke kamar kosan ku lagi?
Donald Brooks
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Wes
Movements need to be more fluid and lip sync is off
John Vargas
the timing in frames 270-326 feels off, However, I see the idea you were going for. The timing frames 143-198 looks great and steady though.