Explorers

Conway Dobbs

clear story but the mouth moment does not go with the words very well. Also too slow at the start what is he looking at make that clear. A character should never stop moving. Yes this effect some times works in 2D but not 3D. Even in those moments you should have some movement, it helps a lot. Character who is not holding the jewel, mouth is too far forward. The grab is too fast. What scares him?