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A Suggestion
by Devonn W.
Description
An acquaintance asks a question.
Comments
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Eilin Berrio
Fun story, maybe second character looks at first character a bit earlier to maintain eye contact between characters.
Robert Cartwright
that last frame tho
Harry
I like the poses you got in this piece they tell a great story. I think you could improve your arcs on some of the big movements, overall nice piece.
Elisabeth Janerka
Good potential in animation, but the setup is super unclear
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
For the most part, the animation is very good, and I like the story. Just need to slow down the speed of some pose and camera transitions.