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Fun Talk on a Park Bench
by Jamie Kalen
im in high school okay
Comments
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Adam Watkins
A really promising animatic with good posing and composition but needs that animation. Great start though!
Reece Morgado
There's a lot of character and personality behind each scene here, it's just a shame you didn't manage to get past the storyboard/animatic phase
Elisabeth Janerka
Had to watch it twice to understand who was talking.
Robert Cartwright
what a heartbreaking animatic. Lovely style you have there, and man what a strong message you put forward, even with so few frames I feel for the character with the horns. Great work!
Jamie F
Lovely drawings. Would have loved to have seen this finished.
Richard Adams
Beautifully drawn, appealing character design, idea and staging works really well. Wish there were a lot more in-between drawings to smooth out the stuttery animation.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Nice animatic. Interesting fresh twist on the lines.





