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The Greatest Magician

by altaf

Final Rating: 5.78. Finished #31 out of 182 entries.

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Animator

altaf

Experience

5 plus years

Time Taken

last 20 days on and of

Description

claiming to be best ! an older brother is going to any limits to preserve their Traditional Occupation.

Comments

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Edoardo Sartori

What is the story ?

Jamie F

Some nice stuff here. But the camera move at the beginning doesn't work for me. And the breakdown at about frame 250 - 260 makes no sense to me - I think to fit the move and mood it needs to be more functional and less "wavey"

Robert Cartwright

Love the extra effort you put into this! Very fluid! Great work!

Harry

I really like how you made audio into a story. I feel like the second characters faint doesn't quite read as well as some of the other actions but I love his little shake in the end. Great work!

Elisabeth Janerka

Good potential in animation, but the setup is very unclear

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

Some of the choices for the second character are a bit strange (why does he fall down and get up all of a sudden?) but otherwise the animation is great.