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The mix up
The two main characters are a scientist and a chef
The chef is carrying a secret recipe and the scientist is carrying poison. The two men walk into one another and mix the viles up.
Comments
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John M
Extra points for the storyline, but animation lacking and too many camera movements. Needs to be a lot crisper. Nice try.
Daniel Miller
it'd be funny if the baker switched the vials with the other guy at "...it wouldn't be funny at all"
Eilin Berrio
I like your story but I believe animation could be much better, more interesting poses (line of actions), composition (rule of thirds)...
Catherine Lachepelle
The characters are too static : add body and hand movement during the dialogue to give them more life
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
The character animation is clearly still in keyposes, and the camera cuts are very confusing.