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Wolf and the Rabbit
by Max Allen
Description
A wolf stalks towards a rabbit in the middle of the forest.
Comments
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Robert Cartwright
The wolf is a little bit stiff in his movements forward, maybe try giving him more up-down motion, almost like he's slithering toward her on all fours. I love the hop at the end when he laughs though. It'd also be interesting to see Judy slinking back, doing the crab walk backwards or something, trying to get away before bumping into the rock. Great work!
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Is there lipsync? Maybe it's because I keep seeing the characters in profile, but it looks like basic up-and-down. Also the animation needs more inbetweens.