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Finally finished
by Jason Smit
Finally completed a model battleship, what could go wrong...
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Catherine Lachepelle
No movement at all of the body, only facials
Robert Cartwright
Love the cute character designs! The characters seem to be animated a little loosely though, kind of like a gelatin substance, which, while it looks super cool, makes it a bit difficult to show the emotion in the scene. I'd suggest for your next one downloading one of the incredible custom rigs that the 11 Second Club hosts, or finding a more humanoid one yourself to try, as I think you'll find they're much easier to use in the long run. Overall great work though! Can't wait to see your next month's!
Matthew Campbell
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Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
The animation is very rough (the arms of the left guy even twitches) and there's almost no life to these characters. Definitely need more expressions and posing.