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Reflecting on the Past
Description
2 people talk reflect on their pasts
Comments
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Elisabeth Janerka
Two things
1. Why doesn't the guy in the chair have eyes??
2. The composition could be improved a lot. I didn't even notice the character on the right at first, because he is so far out to the side. I would lower the camera (it is a bit weird that we are looking down on them like this), and then rotate is so we get both characters more centered in frame. Finally I would move the character (to the right) closer to the character sitting in the chair
Joshua Kaberline
Nice job!
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Good animation, could use some more energy and personality to the characters.