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Hire me a Hitman
by tequila
Two couples hires a hitman to assasin their neighbor who assumedly killed their dog and has kidnapped their child. Though the hitman questions them about their doubts, the couple wishes to proceed with the plan.
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Robert Cartwright
The facial expressions look a bit twitchy, but otherwise this looks fantastic! Just smooth out the facial poses a bit and it'll be incredible! Great work!
Joshua Kaberline
Nice characters, great modeling, expressions are done really well.
Catherine Lachepelle
The first pose on the first character is very appealing and tells us immediately who he is, good job! However, the girl does not add anything to the shot - you could have concentrated on the man's reaction (the transition between laughter and ''fear'' is way too abrupt). The first character right hand is also a little ''dead'' most of the shot - fingers could move a little to reinforce the emotion!
Nathaniel Vaughan
A little jittery on the movements. Cuts off a little early too.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Very good. Just feel the first talking character had a lot more work and refinement put into him than the second.