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Heaven vs Hell
by James Mole
The Devil vs The Angel - but things turn out with a twist! I would of love to have added more polish to this shot, I only started it 16th October and I plan on adding more polish.
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Adam Watkins
I love how expressive the devil's movement is and the facial expressions for both were really good too! Every movement seemed to have a really clear arc which made it very fluid and smooth.
If there's anything I'd change it would probably be the angel's acting, I feel like you could have sold it more by having them really thrust their arm out when revealing the cross and have the lean in towards the devil more to give the motion more impact. Other than that it's great!
Eilin Berrio
I think you have some interesting poses. I think you could do with a lot less cuts and a better composition.
Joshua Kaberline
Good work on the devil’s lip sync. The angel could have some of the mouth shapes tweaked a bit for better pronunciation, particularly when he says “all”.
Elisabeth Janerka
Fun setup, but I would try to improve the compostion and framing of the two characters. The white character is always very close to the frame
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Nice.