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It would sure be funny if...

by Craig Petty

Final Rating: 3.43. Finished #134 out of 182 entries.

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Animator

Craig Petty

Experience

not much...

Time Taken

1 month

Description

Not sure what has happened but maybe what they thought was good and bad wasn't quite so bad...or so good, so to speak!

Comments

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Craig Petty

This is just...GREAT! Maybe I am biased for some reason? Seriously a few parts are floaty and, in general, I preferred my final step-blocking stages to the final "smooth" piece. I do like the spin on the story aspect and certain subtle aspects are appealing!

Robert Cartwright

Some of the lip syncing could use a little touching up, especially the second guy, but I love the emotion and the almost stop-motion animation style you're doing there! Well done!

Catherine Lachepelle

Body needs to be moving at least a little. We do feel your poses too much, and the arcs are not smooth enough

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

The poses still need inbetweens, and changing the second character's laughter to the first may not have been the best call.