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Mob Boss

by Andreas

Final Rating: 5.04. Finished #61 out of 182 entries.

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Animator

Andreas

Experience

2~ years

Time Taken

4 days

Description

My first submission to the 11 second club.

Comments

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Robert Cartwright

Very fluid! Love the boss-employee theme!

Aaron James Mongcopa

some slow ins and slow outs, please.

Catherine Lachepelle

Nice shots! However, both characters have one ''dead'' arm in IK being very static. It's especially distracting on the first character as it looks stuck to the table when he laughs. Try moving it a little, and add some life in the fingers.

Jamie F

Some nice movement at the beginning. The second guy's hand gestures are a little too repetitive and linear.

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

The first character's elbow keeps bouncing off the table and the secon'd laughter isn't visible in the lipsync, but otherwise very good animation.