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Mob Boss
by Andreas
My first submission to the 11 second club.
Comments
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Robert Cartwright
Very fluid! Love the boss-employee theme!
Aaron James Mongcopa
some slow ins and slow outs, please.
Catherine Lachepelle
Nice shots! However, both characters have one ''dead'' arm in IK being very static. It's especially distracting on the first character as it looks stuck to the table when he laughs. Try moving it a little, and add some life in the fingers.
Jamie F
Some nice movement at the beginning. The second guy's hand gestures are a little too repetitive and linear.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
The first character's elbow keeps bouncing off the table and the secon'd laughter isn't visible in the lipsync, but otherwise very good animation.





