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Bar Talk
by Himo3d.Life
Two man talking talking about the things that did wrong last night.
Comments
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John M
Nice action.
Eilin Berrio
I think there is nice acting at times but I would have avoided breaking the 180° rule for your cut as it may result in a confused audience.
Joshua Kaberline
I like your characters!
mingJ
Nice camera work
Catherine Lachepelle
Nice camera work on the moment of realization of character B, and nice set-up! To improve things up, I would suggest to work more on the fingers, as they pretty much do not move during the scene. Character A also stops moving altogether after frame 218 - we need to know how he is taking in what B is saying!
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
A bit too jumpy, and the fingers are mostly static.